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Posted on Nov 18th, 2006 by

i'm falling for you...

laying naked and helpless

waiting for your rake.

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about 6 hours later

Joy Bringer said

So expressive & moving Haiku master…

waiting for the rake
vulnerable after the fall
let yourself be touched

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about 9 hours later

Dana said

Response to line one: Awww, shucks.
Response to line two: hmmmmmmm
Response to line three: Okay, I get it now.

Great work. :)